Riverpaw | Shoreclan

[cinder]

NAME// Riverpaw
AGE// 9 Moons
GENDER// She-cat
CLAN// Shoreclan
DESIRED POSITION// Apprentice
SHORT DESCRIPTION// Small silver-grey tabby she cat with bright amber eyes.


DESCRIPTION//

Lithe she-cat with light grey, tabby fur that shows silver in the sun. She has bright attenetative amber eyes that are always watching what is going on around her.

PERSONALITY//

Riverpaw is a sweet cat that would do almost anything for anyone. She has a strong sense of honor and loyalty, and will do anything to keep her clan and family safe. She is respectful of her elders and attentative to those that are older than she is hoping to learn all that she can. She is highly respectful, and likes to spend her free time helping the elders, queens, and warriors with whatever she can. She is always thinking things over in her head and calculating the next move, her brain never stops. She would rather use her reasoning skills than fight, but will not hesitate to join in a battle. What she lacks in size, she makes up in the ability to think fast and be light and quick on her feet. Riverpaw is friendly towards everyone unless they have given her a reason not to be, and once her trust s lost it is extremely hard to get back.

EXPERIENCE//

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OTHER//

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[Dusk]

alrighty! so the content of this all looks good but I'm afraid I have to nitpick for neatness' sake. ^_^*:

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if you wouldn't mind directly copying the code right there and then filling the info in where the hashmarks currently are that'd be great.

and I also need to ask that you make the title in the format Riverpaw | Shoreclan

thanks!

[Dusk]

~accepted~

and welcome again to shoreclan AND anarchy. :P