Wolfie
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Post by Wolfie on Jul 6, 2012 16:32:30 GMT -5
 Wolfpaw// ---
AGE 6 moons
GENDER Tom
CLAN Tempest
DESIRED POSITION Apprentice
SHORT DESCRIPTION
A dark tabby tom with one pale green eyes and one foggy blue eye.
DESCRIPTION// Wolfpaw is a gray tom with black stripes. His paw tips are white as well. He will be broad and thick when he’s done growing. His body is made for fighting, but also good at hunting. He has big paws for an apprentice, which means he is going to be big tom when he’s done growing. His right eye is pale-green with speckles of yellow, while his left is sky-blue. Wolfpaw is half-blind.
PERSONALITY As an apprentice Wolfpaw is easily discouraged. He wallows in self-pity for himself. He hates feeling like a burden to the clan. He wants to prove himself, but can’t, because he gives up on himself easily. Since he is so discouraged in himself Wolfpaw comes off rude and mean sometimes. He doesn’t mean to, but he just can’t help it. Even though he is discouraged Wolfpaw is 100% loyal to his clan. He loves his clan, even if he doesn’t show it. He doesn't believe he’ll ever be a warrior. That makes him seriously depressed by that thought. Wolfpaw doesn't see how mouse-brain he really is being.
As Wolfpaw grows up, he learns that he’s not a burden to his clan, but only if he makes himself a burden. He slowly gains more positive traits, thanks to his mentor. He learns to be more respectful to his clan mates. He figured snapping at them will get him nowhere in his life. He becomes wiser and less moody. He knows he was being mouse brain when he let his self-pity rule his life. Wolfpaw becomes actually pleasant and friendly to be around. He puts his entire heart into the clan instead of half his heart.
EXPERIENCE// IWolfpaw was born to Silverclaw an Blackstorm. He was the oldest of four. His brother and one of his sisters pasted away a few days afterwards It was just Wolfpaw and Moonpaw. He was half-blind. This caused a riffle between Silverclaw and Blackstorm. They had stop being mates and Blackstorm refused to call Wolfpaw his son. He disowned him. Blackstorm was ashamed of Wolfpaw. He felt like his son would be nothing. Blackstorm was raised to perfection. If you weren't perfect you weren't worthy. Wolfpaw was far from perfect.
Silverclaw always watched her son with pity in her eyes. She never let him be alone or out of her sight. When other kits played Silverclaw pulled him away when it became too rough. This cause Wolfpaw to resent his mother, because she never let him be a kit. Wolfpaw soon drifting farther from his mother and the rest of the kit. He slept as far as he could from all of them. He wanted to be alone and not have his mother treat him like he was burden. This is where his self-pity formed for his self.
He's only close to Moonpaw really. He's very protective of his sister. If you mess with her you have to go though Wolfpaw. If someone hurt her, he would shred them and then ask question later. She is the only cat he truly care and can stand. Sure sister can be annoying, but he loves her anyways.
He may have been rude to his mentor, but it wasn't out of disrespect. He felt like he was someone after while, but he still needs to be broken out of his shell. He kept his walls up still around everyone. His walls don't drop until he is almost a warrior. With patience and love, he will be a worthy warrior.
OTHER// Half-blind |
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Post by MiNTY♥ on Jul 6, 2012 23:36:06 GMT -5
Just one thing, could you change the title so it reads 'Wolfpaw | Hollowclan' just so they are all the same  |
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Wolfie
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Post by Wolfie on Jul 7, 2012 9:21:36 GMT -5
Like that?
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Post by MiNTY♥ on Jul 7, 2012 9:26:15 GMT -5
Perfect!
Xx accepted
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