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Post by aero ❥ on Jun 23, 2012 19:39:17 GMT -5
anarchyfelines.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=charriemaker&thread=6718BRISTLEPAW | SHORECLAN | 8 MOONS Alright, so here it is. The end all plan for this innocent is death when the clans reach their new home. What I want for his short life is to make friends - apprentices and warriors. He is very dependent and needs others to help and protect him, and being as kind and simple as he is it's hard not to love him. So I was thinking one or two male warriors that he looks up to and loves, they watch out for him and defend him and spend time with him or whatnot. One female warrior who he at first is shy around but acts as a motherly figure to him reassuring him and treating him with care. Then a male apprentice who becomes his friend, and Bristlepaw looks up to him and thinks the world of him. A female apprentice who talks to him sometimes and he is VERY shy and bashful around, thinking she's very pretty he has a sort of little-kid crush on her. But he also needs bullies. A warrior, gender here doesn't matter, that isn't nice to him, thinks of him as a pain, and is irritated by his lack of understanding. Maybe one of Bristle's warrior friends catches this cat being basically an asshole to him and stands up to him/her. Bristlepaw also needs bullies his own age. Maybe a little group that gets together with toms and she-cats that make fun of him and torment him, his apprentice friend backing Bristle up, maybe with the help of his she-cat crush? The whole point of this character is to touch the lives of those who get to know him, opening their eyes, teaching them compassion, or giving them responsibility. And when Bristle dies, they're left sad and missing their innocent friend who had more heart, loyalty, and kindness than anyone else they knew. It would be something to add to your cat's history, and if you wanted to help develop your character a little befriending them with Bristlepaw would certainly help. Which clan they belong to doesn't matter, since for the journey they become one. I very much adore this tragic story I've suggested, and it would be my honor to carry it through with the help of some talented Anarchy members. (:
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Post by Dusk on Jun 23, 2012 20:28:29 GMT -5
volunteering lash to be the big bro figure in his life or something. bristle could teach him not to sniff at everyone else and learn humility. although dawneh might want horizon to serve that because I could so see horizon being the best thing in bristle's life.
i could also offer up martenpaw as a bully. or fawndance as a granny-nanny/sassmaster or something.
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Post by aero ❥ on Jun 24, 2012 20:16:55 GMT -5
Bristle would love for at least Lash to be a friend, if not the big bro. (: Whether Dawn wants Horizon to be a big bro or not I guess we shall see! ;o
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