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Post by snakevenom on Jun 12, 2012 18:39:34 GMT -5
NAME// Snakevenom
AGE// 13 moons
GENDER// Tom
CLAN// ZephyrClan!
DESIRED POSITION// Warrior
SHORT DESCRIPTION// Black cat with red eyes
DESCRIPTION//
PERSONALITY// Though he has a tough outside, if you really tried to make friends with him, you'd break through that outer shell to a whole new cat. On the outside, he's intolerable, annoying, kind of a 'tough-guy' and just...weird. But on the inside, he's nice, tolerable, and just plain shy.
EXPERIENCE// Umm..I can't think of anything for his past, so I'm gonna skip this!
OTHER// Since he's my fursona, he's a but bipolar like, well, me! |
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Post by Dusk on Jun 12, 2012 18:46:40 GMT -5
kk, so this is looking alright, but i'm afraid I'll need you to correct a few things.
[center]picture here.[/center]
[blockquote][b]NAME[/b]// ---
[b]AGE[/b]// ---
[b]GENDER[/b]// ---
[b]CLAN[/b]// ---
[b]DESIRED POSITION[/b]// ---
[b]SHORT DESCRIPTION[/b]// ---
[b]DESCRIPTION[/b]// [blockquote]---[/blockquote]
[b]PERSONALITY[/b]// [blockquote]---[/blockquote]
[b]EXPERIENCE[/b]// [blockquote]---[/blockquote]
[b]OTHER[/b]// [blockquote]---[/blockquote][/blockquote]
first off, see that code up there? would you mind copy-pasting that and then you can just paste the character details in where the dashes currently are? it makes for easier formatting.
second; the short description is required. it's really just like a one sentence thing to describe the cat i.e "a silver tabby with green eyes" just something simple for your character. the picture can, however, replace a full-length description
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Post by snakevenom on Jun 13, 2012 6:08:25 GMT -5
Why do I need that giant code thing? I got my bio thing off of the boards. But there, I've modified. Is that better?
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