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Post by tinyxriot on Mar 13, 2012 17:57:03 GMT -5
NAME// Tigerpaw AGE// 9 moons GENDER// Tom CLAN// Tempestclan DESIRED POSITION// Apprentice SHORT DESCRIPTION// A sweet white and ginger tomcat with amber eyes
DESCRIPTION// not yet full grown, but has the potential to be decently sized. he is a stark white tomcat, with small splashes of creamy ginger fur on his tail, head, muzzle and hunches. amber eyes. He is a rather lean tom, though not to the point of slenderness, and very quick and light on his paws. PERSONALITY// summed up in a few words Tigerpaw is a real sweetheart. He is kind and sweet, and also a bit of a gentleman. He has a hard time saying no to anyone with a sincere request, especially a pretty she-cat. While Tigerpaw is a self-reliant tom all the way, he is one who falls easily into a net of emotions and feelings, usually those surrounding a she-cat, and can find it extremely difficult to break free. However, when not trapped, Tigerpaw is loyal and kind to she-cats and his friends alike, though he may tend to gravitate towards the pretty females. Where females aren't concerned, though, Tigerpaw is just a happy-go-lucky, bubbly cat. He has plenty of energy to spare, and tends to fidget when stuck in camp. He has an overactive imagination and is rather easily distracted, especially during battle training. Tigerpaw is not much of a fighter, but he is quite gifted at tracking which makes hunting a breeze. OTHER// ---
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Post by MiNTY♥ on Mar 13, 2012 18:12:25 GMT -5
Could you maybe add a couple of sentences, possible about how he may act around experienced warriors or whether he is mentally able to break free? Just so we learn a little bit more about him when pretty females are not concerned (: thank you!
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Post by tinyxriot on Mar 13, 2012 18:33:28 GMT -5
Should be all fixed up now ^.^
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Post by MiNTY♥ on Mar 14, 2012 11:05:10 GMT -5
xx accepted
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