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Post by bluefire on Feb 26, 2012 20:16:56 GMT -5
NAME// Dogfang AGE// 25 moons GENDER// She-Cat CLAN// VertigoClan DESIRED POSITION// Warrior SHORT DESCRIPTION// Beautiful Orange Tabby she-cat with pale green eyes and long legs
DESCRIPTION// Beautiful Orange Tabby she-cat with pale green eyes and long legs. White on Chest, muzzle, all four paws, and tip of tail. Claws as hard as diamonds and as sharp as dog's teeth.
PERSONALITY// Mostly in a bad mood. She is not to be ordered around or messed with. Any outsider that orders her around will be killed, no questions asked. She is a strong and powerful fighter and a fast runner for her size. ONLY sweet to friends, mate, and kits. Rarely in a good mood. Named "Dog" because she's dangerous like a dog and named "Fang" because one bite from her will instantly kill prey or an opposing cat. And, whether in a good mood or bad, he is always longing for a mate. She likes to hunt, and while she'd never start one, she always must be in the middle of a fight. This tendency may grate on others, but she isn't a cat who cares what others think. Trustworthy, hardworking, and honest, despite her initially unlikable demeanor you may find yourself drawn to her, after getting to know her you might find you like her. In other words, friendly, but not too friendly. She can also be flirty if she actually likes the tom.
EXPERIENCE// ---
OTHER// ---
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Post by LYNX ♥ on Feb 26, 2012 20:40:59 GMT -5
you'll need to use the proper biography form before I can accept this. c:
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Post by bluefire on Feb 26, 2012 20:44:27 GMT -5
ok. done.
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Post by LYNX ♥ on Feb 26, 2012 20:46:46 GMT -5
I'm sorry blue, but vertigoclan deputy is already taken. and perhaps you should look at other finished bios to see how it's supposed to look. the coding needs to be correct before this can be accepted so that all the biographies look nice and neat. {:
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Post by bluefire on Feb 26, 2012 20:52:34 GMT -5
gave it my all
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Post by LYNX ♥ on Feb 26, 2012 21:54:02 GMT -5
does it look like the other bios to you? here, I'll edit it for you to show you what it should look like, but really all you need to do is copy the original code and only edit it where text goes~ but I digress.
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Post by LYNX ♥ on Feb 26, 2012 21:56:58 GMT -5
take note of the coding; NOW she's accepted. c:
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