Post by rufio on Jul 30, 2011 15:02:02 GMT -5
So let me line out the plot for you:
Inkpaw is mean. Inkpaw is greedy. Inkpaw does not like being ignored.
Growing up as an apprentice, Inkpaw feels that he is ignored, never listened to, and mistreated in the worst of ways. He does not like this. From birth, he's always been off, but somehow he's been smart enough to keep up an act. Pretending to be innocent, plastering a smile on that maw of his. One that will one day be stained through and through with other's blood.
As time goes on, no one seems to notice Inkpaw's silent plotting, the greedy and vicious looks he gives to other's backs, the deep desires to feel their throats in his maw, to feel their life source draining out, slowly but surely. No one is any wiser, despite the slow churning of the gears in his plans. He wants revenge, served cold and fresh. He wants every single cat that has ever treated him in a way that he sees unfit to lie in a pool of their own blood. And he wants to start with every single cat in his own clan.
Now, I'm not saying this ever happens. In fact, what really happens is pretty much that he gets found out once he becomes a warrior. Once he receives the name that will haunt all his 'friends'. Inkblood. He will become an outcast, a rogue from Tempestclan. Now, the clans are known for not much appreciating one another, and such news as one of their stronger, brand-new warriors becoming a rogue and turning crazed on them... Well, that's not something you share in small talk. They keep to themselves about this information.
Inkblood, by this time, has gone mad. Mad with the fact that he could not accomplish his goals. Mad that, for the first time in his life, he was denied something. And if he can't have something so simple as complete and utter annihilation of the clan of his birth, than why should anyone else get anything at all? Crazed by what one might assume grief, enraged at his failure, he goes wild, parading around the different territories and causing as much havoc as he can.
While he still smells fresh of Tempestclan, he runs rampant over every single clan territory, killing as much prey, and anyone that might get in his way. When he's done all this, he sits back and enjoys, hoping that all the clans will turn on TC in a blind rage.
After this point, I think maaaaaaaybe my plot gets out of hand, but I mean, read anyway C: It probably won't escalate this far. If it does, then I AM SO GAME lolwut.
He may or may not get complete satisfaction. Again, I'm hoping he won't get his way. Slowly, he'll draw out the worst in the clans. From every direction, attacks. Every sort of betrayal. Anything he can do to make the others infuriated. After the first couple days, Tempestclan will hopefully spill the beans, telling the others of who has been creating so much havoc. They might rally together and try to find him. Maybe they won't. Maybe they'll let him be, cutting their losses and figuring they'll catch him in a trap at some point. Either way, Inkblood's name will come to be affiliated with everything that can go wrong in a cat's life.
ANYWAY, I'm telling you all this because....
a, I'm not sure how many people want their cat's to die or be injured during this plot
b, it might be a bit too outlandish
c, I want to build on it. Flesh it out some more.
Constructive feedback or other suggestions are greatly appreciated, and you are free to try and build your characters into it. Thanks for reading all this, sorry if it's too outlandish C: I just got this great idea while sparring today, hurr hurr.
Inkpaw is mean. Inkpaw is greedy. Inkpaw does not like being ignored.
Growing up as an apprentice, Inkpaw feels that he is ignored, never listened to, and mistreated in the worst of ways. He does not like this. From birth, he's always been off, but somehow he's been smart enough to keep up an act. Pretending to be innocent, plastering a smile on that maw of his. One that will one day be stained through and through with other's blood.
As time goes on, no one seems to notice Inkpaw's silent plotting, the greedy and vicious looks he gives to other's backs, the deep desires to feel their throats in his maw, to feel their life source draining out, slowly but surely. No one is any wiser, despite the slow churning of the gears in his plans. He wants revenge, served cold and fresh. He wants every single cat that has ever treated him in a way that he sees unfit to lie in a pool of their own blood. And he wants to start with every single cat in his own clan.
Now, I'm not saying this ever happens. In fact, what really happens is pretty much that he gets found out once he becomes a warrior. Once he receives the name that will haunt all his 'friends'. Inkblood. He will become an outcast, a rogue from Tempestclan. Now, the clans are known for not much appreciating one another, and such news as one of their stronger, brand-new warriors becoming a rogue and turning crazed on them... Well, that's not something you share in small talk. They keep to themselves about this information.
Inkblood, by this time, has gone mad. Mad with the fact that he could not accomplish his goals. Mad that, for the first time in his life, he was denied something. And if he can't have something so simple as complete and utter annihilation of the clan of his birth, than why should anyone else get anything at all? Crazed by what one might assume grief, enraged at his failure, he goes wild, parading around the different territories and causing as much havoc as he can.
While he still smells fresh of Tempestclan, he runs rampant over every single clan territory, killing as much prey, and anyone that might get in his way. When he's done all this, he sits back and enjoys, hoping that all the clans will turn on TC in a blind rage.
After this point, I think maaaaaaaybe my plot gets out of hand, but I mean, read anyway C: It probably won't escalate this far. If it does, then I AM SO GAME lolwut.
He may or may not get complete satisfaction. Again, I'm hoping he won't get his way. Slowly, he'll draw out the worst in the clans. From every direction, attacks. Every sort of betrayal. Anything he can do to make the others infuriated. After the first couple days, Tempestclan will hopefully spill the beans, telling the others of who has been creating so much havoc. They might rally together and try to find him. Maybe they won't. Maybe they'll let him be, cutting their losses and figuring they'll catch him in a trap at some point. Either way, Inkblood's name will come to be affiliated with everything that can go wrong in a cat's life.
ANYWAY, I'm telling you all this because....
a, I'm not sure how many people want their cat's to die or be injured during this plot
b, it might be a bit too outlandish
c, I want to build on it. Flesh it out some more.
Constructive feedback or other suggestions are greatly appreciated, and you are free to try and build your characters into it. Thanks for reading all this, sorry if it's too outlandish C: I just got this great idea while sparring today, hurr hurr.
