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Post by callie on Mar 27, 2011 15:28:07 GMT -5
NAME// --- Snowberry AGE// --- twenty three moons GENDER// --- she-cat CLAN// --- ZephyrClan DESIRED POSITION// --- medicine cat SHORT DESCRIPTION// --- a white she-cat with creamier patches and hazel eyes
DESCRIPTION// Snowberry is smaller than most cats. Her body length is only about ten inches long, not including her tail. Her height is 9 1/2 inches tall, which is again small compared to average cats. Snowberry is only a little larger than a apprentice, which she is sometimes mistakened as. Her build is scrawny and she has little muscle. Her body is very bony, especially where her ribs are. They always stick out no matter how much the she-cat eats.
Snowberry's legs make up most of her height. They are long, lithe, and skinny. Near the paws her bones really stick out. The fur on her legs is very thin, so it is easy to see her pinkish skin underneath his white pelt.. Her paws are also very small at the end of her legs, but at the end of her paws are long black claws.
Snowberry's pelt is almost pure white all the way through, but she has patches of cream along her back. They are very hard to see and are usually thought of as a reflection of the sun. All along her back you can clearly see Snowberry's spine running across. Also along the spine you can again see her skin. It is harder to see though than on her legs.
Snowberry's head fits her body. Again the bones are very easily seen on her face. Near and around her eyes you can see a little of her pink skin. The most noticiable bone on her head is the one on her snout. It is clearly sticking out of her fur but it doesn't look bad.
Snowberry's fur on her head is still white. But on her head between the ears is a line of cream that leads down to the back. Inside her ears she has cream fur. They line the insides for protection against dirt and bugs. Under her eyes are also a few splotches of cream but they are much harder to see.
Snowberry has average sized ears. But they are a little bit more pointy than most. The insides of her ears are pink like the rest of her skin. On her ears are flecks of cream. This is the only place on her body bones are not noticeable.
The rest of Snowberryface is very average like many other cats. She has a regular size snout with a quite small black nose on the end. But what really defines Snowberry is her large hazel eyes.
Finally Snowberry has a wonky leg due to a previous injury. Her back leg is broken. Now it is stuck up in the air almost like she is running all the time or perched up on a tree. She can't move it at all. The fur is missing where the bone was cracked and it has never grown back since.
PERSONALITY//
Snowberry is optimistic, she may always look pissed off but she's not. She's actually a very good friend and she always wants the best and hopes for the best to happen. She does get along with pessimists however because she can sometimes be that way. She attempts not to be though. She found it easier to get along with optimisitc cats.
She is also strong. Not physically strong, but emotionally. She can wade through some pretty tough waters. When stuff does come up that brings everyone down, she tries to push through it. Sometimes, this does not work though.
Snowberry is also very creative. She likes coming up with new and fun ideas. She creates things that pass the time. She gets bored easily, and this creativness definetly comes in handy. Hopefully, it will help others too.
Snowberry is very smart. She catches onto things very quickly. This can be a big help if she ever gets into trouble. She was taught a lot when she was younger by her father. She also likes to share this knowledge with others.
She has few faults as well. Snowberry is very aggressive. If she wants something, she must get it. She always has to be better at everything, because she has a very competitive attitude as well. This can be a fault, as well as a good thing.
She can be a bit stuck-up. This is rare, but sometimes she likes to gloat. She only cares about herself sometimes, but it's when she is irritated or angry when this happens. Most of the time she is very friendly. This stuck-up attitude is hard to come across.
Snowberry is also has a temper. She gets angry at some of the simplest things. If her clan is ever to run out of food, she gets upset. This temper came from her mother, who also had a large temper. But, this temper can also help the clan
EXPERIENCE// kithood Snowkit was given birth to by a warrior of ZephyrClan and a rogue. The warrior of ZephyrClan was a she-cat named Dawnflower. The rogue was Shade. Shade was a thief who stole a lot of prey from the ZephyrClan territories, leaving the Clan with a prey decrease. Shade wasn't the only rogue but he was the only one Snowberry knew about. One morning, Snowkit and her three siblings were birthed. Blackkit and Berrykit were her brothers while Nightkit was her sister. They all looked the same except for Snowkit. She was much smaller than the other three and he had patches of cream all around her white pelt. Blackkit was blind, Berrykit and Nightkit were average apprentices. They had no mutations or anything that might cause them to have a bad fate or not become a warrior. At that time Snowkit was the same.
One day news came that Shade and his bunch of rogues had been found. The Clan was attacking and Dawnflower was in tears. At this time Snowkit was three moons old. She could now see and she had bright hazel eyes. Her siblings had dark brown/black eyes, she was different again. Nothing was wrong with this though, only a simple coloring of eyes. Everytime Snowkit tried to ask Dawnflower what was wrong she would only hiss at the she-cat and tell her to keep it quiet. Only the will of StarClan let the queen keep her mouth shut.
Snowkit had almost became an apprentice when the news of Shade's death came. The four kits were starting to become rambuctious and wanting to leave the camp and explore. Nightkit spoke up that morning when Dawnflower left to go get prey for herself. "We should go on an adventure! Dawn hasn't even come yet and Dawnflower is the only one awake. We can sneak out through the dirtplace." All the siblings agreed almost immediatley. Smiling they walked out of the camp. After getting most of their fur ripped out by thorns they were outside. "Whoooah!" was all they managed to say. So they ventured off further to see what else there was around the territory.
Not far off into the territory Snowkit scented something weird. All the other kits must have scented it to since all their noses scrunched up in disgust. So they followed it until Blackkit fell into a large hole. At this point they had no idea Blackkit was blind. Suddenly the heard snarling, a mewl, and a loud snap. They waited for Blackkit to come back out when they heard what sounded like a stick breaking reached their ears. A few moments later, they were greeted, not by their brother, but by a large russet fox. Growling it ran towards the kits who ran almost instantly. Snowkit and Nightkit were fast but Berrykit was much slower. Again the kits heard the same snapping sound, but they had gotten away. Or so they thought. Both their brothers had died.
Again the fox gave chase. It was much faster than the kits and quickly caught up. Snowkit turned, told Nightkit to continue running, and faced the fox. Hissing she pounced clumsily remembering watching the apprentices playing outside. She was in the air and felt like she was flying. Then her face hit the ground with a loud smack, then the fox was upon her. Snowkit turned just in time to see the fox's white teeth glistening in the now arriving dawn sun coming down towards her. Snowkit just barley escaped the teeth coming down on her neck or belly but instead they closed on her leg. It snapped almost in two, but barley stayed where it was. It was formed like she was perched up in a tree. Snowkit blacked out but not before seeing a pair of flying black forms going towards the fox.
apprenticeship
Snowkit woke up to find herself laying in the medicine cat den. She could smell the herbs in the medicine cat's store room. "What is that?" Snowkit mewed in pain. But she never did get a reply. She hadn't even recieved her apprentice ceremony. Oh well she thought to herself. She slept most of that moon while her leg was healing. She needed to be able to at least walk before having the ceremony.
Finally after a long moon of waiting Snowpaw had her ceremony. She was proud of herself, even though she wouldn't be a warrior. But also on that day Snowpaw had a change of mind. She liked the medicine cat and her job in the clan, plus she knew it would be hard for her to learn to hunt and climb trees and such since she was a cripple. So that day she asked to be the medicine cat apprentice and so it was. It was that day that Snowpaw learned that Nightkit and Dawnflower were the ones who had thrown themselves at the fox. Snowpaw mourned her sister, thinking that she had had a better future than she. But there was nothing he could do to undo what had happened. All she could do was protect the cats of RockClan from future happenings.
medicine cat
After learning her herbs, and protecting her clan from illness, she finally became the medicine cat due to the other one retiring to the elders den. She became Snowberry due to her love of the bright colors of berrys, and her white pelt explains the snow. So now, she protects the clan on her own.
OTHER// applying for medicine cat, sample post
A white ghost pulled itself across the clearing. One leg, shot up into the air, never to be moved again. Fur was missing, and there was a bright patch of pink there. This ghost was very tiny, white fur with creamier patches along the spine and in between the ears.
The ghost heard its name spoken, Snowberry. But it was not a clanmates voice, it was her sister's. She herself, was a real ghost, Snowberry was alive. She was the medicine cat, the herb storer of ZephyrClan.
Her mind played pictures of her past. So much pain to be found there, none would want to visit it. Most cats knew of her past, that's why she was the medicine cat now. Usually Snowberry would be quite optimistic, but today she was grumpy.
Her paws lightly grazed the clearings ground as she walked. She didn't set her paws to hard on the ground. She was walking to nowhere. She had nowhere to go. She wanted her sister back, so she would have someone to talk to.
Noone was trying to conversse with Snowberry at the moment. She felt so lonley. She had friends, but she just didn't talk to them all the time. Especially when she was in a bad mood. Like this day. She sat down, wincing as she brought her bad leg down.
It didn't hurt, it just felt awkward. Especially since apprentices stared at her weird. It brought her more pain. To see the looks in their little eyes. They didn't know what had happened to her. They didn't need to know.
Her life was ruined all thanks to that Russet beast. If only they had stayed in that nursery that day. Why had they been so mouse-brained. Well, she couldn't change it now. So she sat there, waiting for a better day and a new dawn.
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Post by MiNTY♥ on Mar 28, 2011 2:15:57 GMT -5
Great bio and since lion is currently away I wont leave you waiting too long. Just one thing at the start of your history is says Rockclan, could you please change this?
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Post by callie on Mar 31, 2011 8:28:14 GMT -5
fixed.
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Post by MiNTY♥ on Apr 2, 2011 14:21:27 GMT -5
xx accepted
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