Post by razz on May 13, 2009 18:30:46 GMT -5
Name: HexMark
Age: 27 moons
Gender: She-cat
Former Clan: Zephyr
Desired Position: Deputy
Short Description: An Intelligent grey she-cat with black markings, and a loyal yet wildly sarcastic personality.
Description: Hex’s main coloration is made up of a light grey and tiny bit of white that pokes out on her underbelly and the tip of her paws. But, on the other hand, the grey touches almost all the regions of the female’s body giving her a shadowy look. The coat is also garnished with various marking types including stripes, spots, and miniature splotches that come together in a unique design. This swarthy pigmentation and odd markings both contribute in the creation of the she-cat’s name. HexMark’s statuesque is vary toned and muscular, but still skinny enough to be considered slim. The areas that have the most muscle are the legs, chest, and back of the wench. The neck is quite lengthy and bolsters up a perfectly small skull containing sharp features and a set of mischievous forest-green eyes. Hex’s torso is impressively long with a lengthy tail to match
Personality: Hex Mark is one tough and rowdy cookie, but in a way she is a very loyal feline. Hex’s mother was a very rough and outspoken she-cat so it only makes sense the female acquired those personality traits, as well. Hex, like I said before, is incredibly loyal to her superiors and to her family (aka clan) and will do anything in her power to fulfill her duties with flying colors. As long as she is not betraying her sense of right and wrong, hex will risk her life with no regret. Another funny thing about the she-cat is that she is very laid back and sociable, but incredibly sarcastic and outgoing at times. Every word that comes out of another cat’s mouth, a new sarcastic remark pops into the female’s head. Often times the she-cat can keep her comments too herself, but occasionally a smart or sarcastic remark will leek out and will be followed by a little chuckle. With her apprentices, HexMark is very kind and an excellent and noble teacher, but with toms she tends to be a little too flirty. Kittens are Hex’s weak spot and one day she aspires to be a good mother, but if the female ever witnesses a kit being abused or lectured too harshly the she-cat will instantly snap and raise hell. Another flaw in the warrior’s personality is that she can be very sharp tongued and merciless to her enemies and those who betray or harm her clan. It takes the cat a long time to regain trust, and sometimes she has the habit of holding grudges. Last, but not least, HexMark is one heck of a nerd. She spends extra time with her elders and soaks up knowledge like a sponge; Information is like catnip for Hex. From Battle strategies to hunting tactics, and even some herbs, this will stop at nothing to feed her brain.
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Other: Tell me if you have any advice on improving my character, and constructive criticism is always appreciated! :3
Age: 27 moons
Gender: She-cat
Former Clan: Zephyr
Desired Position: Deputy
Short Description: An Intelligent grey she-cat with black markings, and a loyal yet wildly sarcastic personality.
Description: Hex’s main coloration is made up of a light grey and tiny bit of white that pokes out on her underbelly and the tip of her paws. But, on the other hand, the grey touches almost all the regions of the female’s body giving her a shadowy look. The coat is also garnished with various marking types including stripes, spots, and miniature splotches that come together in a unique design. This swarthy pigmentation and odd markings both contribute in the creation of the she-cat’s name. HexMark’s statuesque is vary toned and muscular, but still skinny enough to be considered slim. The areas that have the most muscle are the legs, chest, and back of the wench. The neck is quite lengthy and bolsters up a perfectly small skull containing sharp features and a set of mischievous forest-green eyes. Hex’s torso is impressively long with a lengthy tail to match
Personality: Hex Mark is one tough and rowdy cookie, but in a way she is a very loyal feline. Hex’s mother was a very rough and outspoken she-cat so it only makes sense the female acquired those personality traits, as well. Hex, like I said before, is incredibly loyal to her superiors and to her family (aka clan) and will do anything in her power to fulfill her duties with flying colors. As long as she is not betraying her sense of right and wrong, hex will risk her life with no regret. Another funny thing about the she-cat is that she is very laid back and sociable, but incredibly sarcastic and outgoing at times. Every word that comes out of another cat’s mouth, a new sarcastic remark pops into the female’s head. Often times the she-cat can keep her comments too herself, but occasionally a smart or sarcastic remark will leek out and will be followed by a little chuckle. With her apprentices, HexMark is very kind and an excellent and noble teacher, but with toms she tends to be a little too flirty. Kittens are Hex’s weak spot and one day she aspires to be a good mother, but if the female ever witnesses a kit being abused or lectured too harshly the she-cat will instantly snap and raise hell. Another flaw in the warrior’s personality is that she can be very sharp tongued and merciless to her enemies and those who betray or harm her clan. It takes the cat a long time to regain trust, and sometimes she has the habit of holding grudges. Last, but not least, HexMark is one heck of a nerd. She spends extra time with her elders and soaks up knowledge like a sponge; Information is like catnip for Hex. From Battle strategies to hunting tactics, and even some herbs, this will stop at nothing to feed her brain.
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Other: Tell me if you have any advice on improving my character, and constructive criticism is always appreciated! :3
I cant wait to roleplay with her. But why didn't the form work I wonder? Anyway, she's accepted as deputy, but she wont become leader. We're probably dropping the entire plot, and as you probably know we're setting the roleplay to multithread, so the current roleplay will be like poof, and we'll start off with new leaders everywhere except VertigoClan. The ZephyrClan leader is reserved so Hex wont become leader, she'll stay deputy. I think that was incredibly overcomplicated but you probably get it. xD
