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Post by Swift ✱ on Mar 12, 2011 7:48:41 GMT -5
NAME// --- Moonbeam
AGE// --- 15 moons
GENDER// --- she-cat
CLAN// --- TempestClan
DESIRED POSITION// --- Warrior
SHORT DESCRIPTION// --- Grey with black and white markings and bright green eyes.
DESCRIPTION// --- Moonbeam’s fur is a mixture of blacks, greys, silvers and whites. Her front paws are tipped with white and her hind legs are white to the ankle. Her face is grey and silver with black stripes reaching back to her torso. Her tail is long and fluffy with black, grey and white fur mixed together in a hazy combination. Around her neck she has a collar of white which links to her white under-belly. She keeps it in good condition even though it is long, fluffy and hard to manage. Her eyes are bright green and always glitter mischieviously.
PERSONALITY// --- Moonbeam may come across as serious occasionally, but most of the time she is a lively, inquisitive and cheerful young cat - but only when around those she is closer to and those she is sure that won't throw her playful comments back in her face. If she is socialising with other cats whom she may not know very well she can be quite shy. She does have a more mature side; she can be responsible, intelligent and witty, when she puts her mind to it - which is not very often. She can be a bit aloof and forgetful, which migh infuriate some when she forgets things. Her eyes always give away how she feels, which is often over-excited. But when it comes to defending her clan, Moonbeam is a no-nonsense type of cat and won't tolerate a word against them. She has much pride in Tempestclan and will always put them before anything else. She is definitely not a rule breaker but she does believe that some rules are made to be broken. Moonbeam is generally kind, sincere and innocent to other cats and will always go out of her way to help them if needed. Moonbeam can be nosy, putting her nose where it doesn't belong, but her innocence usually gets her out of tight spots.
EXPERIENCE// --- Moonbeam's mother was a loner; she left TempestClan many moons ago, leaving her and her sister, Cloudkit, to TempestClan. Soon after their mother left, Cloudkit passed away from disease and now Moonbeam has no other family ties within the clan. [/blockquote] |
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Post by MiNTY♥ on Mar 12, 2011 10:57:50 GMT -5
Could you please make her personality longer please, it doesn't really give us a particularly good insight of her character.
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Post by Swift ✱ on Mar 12, 2011 15:47:55 GMT -5
How about that?  |
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Post by MiNTY♥ on Mar 13, 2011 15:41:12 GMT -5
Well it is better and I'm not trying to be overly picky or anything but there is a rough word count listed where it tells you how to fill out the form, you can find it here. |
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Post by Swift ✱ on Mar 13, 2011 16:36:19 GMT -5
O.K. I see... Sorry!  |
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Post by MiNTY♥ on Mar 14, 2011 15:48:58 GMT -5
It's no problem swift (: thanks for fixing it up for me <3
xx accepted
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