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Post by lace ! on Jun 9, 2011 18:20:47 GMT -5
NAME// --- Flamestripe
AGE// --- 17 moons
GENDER// --- Male
CLAN// --- TempestClan
DESIRED POSITION// --- Warrior
SHORT DESCRIPTION// --- Bright orange tabby tom; moss-green eyes.
DESCRIPTION//
--- Flamestripe is a bright orange tabby tom. His eyes are an emerald-green, and his tail is long and fluffy. Flamestripe's fur is long and usually silky, since he pays great attention to his appearance. Flamestripe has short claws that are generally kept at a sharp point because he considers that a good way to "impress the females". The fur gets lighter the closer it is to his underbelly, the shade descending to almost a white or gray color. A scar is apparent on his left ear from a fight long ago when he was merely an apprentice. He is well muscled, and loves to show it off.
PERSONALITY//
--- Flamestripe is generally pretty kind to those that he are already close to, which include his mentor and siblings. However, to actually get him as a friend is the difficult process that one has to go through. He can be biting, sarcastic, and protective of those that he has already befriended. Since Flamestripe is not one who easily trusts or starts to like another, a large amount of time would have to be spent with him.
Cats also tend not to want to befriend him at first, due to his personality. One could describe him as arrogant and selfish. He is always boasting about what he caught, or trashing others about their appearance or lack of fresh-kill, ect.
However, there are rewards for becoming his friend, if you feel like it. Once Flamestripe starts to understand another cat, he starts to develop a close friendship, closer than that that a normal cat would have. Also, betrayals are something he can't stand; if he is betrayed by a certain cat, he would never forget it.
Flamestripe is also very anti-VertigoClan and does not like outsiders. Along with this; he is ambitious. He would not let anything get in the way of his dreams; except maybe love.
EXPERIENCE//
--- Flamestripe was born in the TempestClan nursery. His mother was Morningmist and his father Thunderstrike. He had two siblings: one brother and one sister. His brother was named Snowkit and his sister Twilightkit. They grew up, knowing each other better than they knew their parents, or any other kit in the nursery. Their parents were quite protective of them, and often didn't allow the other kits to play with them, saying that they were either too noisy or too boisterous. That act of their parents was what resulted in their solitary behavior and their shyness except towards one another. When they became apprenticed, Flamepaw was assigned to Oaktree, Snowpaw to Firestorm, and Twilightpaw to Sunheart. The three mentors were close friends, resulting in the three siblings often training together.
OTHER//
--- None
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Post by MiNTY♥ on Jun 10, 2011 2:03:22 GMT -5
You used vertigoclan in his history, could you change this to tempestclan?
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Post by lace ! on Jun 10, 2011 8:24:05 GMT -5
Crap, didn't even notice. Thanks~
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Post by MiNTY♥ on Jun 10, 2011 9:55:52 GMT -5
xx accepted (:
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