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Post by aero ❥ on Feb 25, 2011 21:24:39 GMT -5
NAME// Streamfall
AGE// 18 Moons
GENDER// Feminine
CLAN// Celestialclan
DESIRED POSITION// Warrior
SHORT DESCRIPTION// A pretty silver tabby with storm grey eyes.
DESCRIPTION// Like the tide on a full moon, Streamfall's coat is a pleasant silver. It looks best at night, the true glitter of it coming out like sparkling dewdrops. It is littered with deep, vivid black tabby markings. Like a trail on an old pirate map leading to a secret treasure. Similar to foam on the waves that crash onto the jagged boulders of a deserted beach, highlights of white are around her eyes. Her belly fur, half of her muzzle, and paws also share this quality. Then, last but not least, there are her eyes. Like a hurricane on the rolling sea, they are a cloudy storm grey. Her build isn't quite petite, a better word to use would be thin and lithe. Her nose is a dark charcoal, with short black and white whiskers that shoot like new spring grass from her angular face. She had extremely small paws for her size.
PERSONALITY// Rather emotionless, Streamfall doesn't express herself like she should. She shows plenty of sympathy, loyalty, and respect, but the excitement, love, and joy one should have is totally washed from her sullen grey eyes. Peaceful, very peaceful. She's like a beautiful statue for all to gaze at - lifeless, still, forever. Her demeanor is calm, wise if you will. She's very much past her age mentally. She'll take anyone under her wing, whether they're deserving or not. She believes everyone is valuable, has a purpose. That is what makes her so beautiful. This she-cat has a soft-spot for kits and generally cats younger than herself. She also doesn't mind tending to the elders.
Love. It seems like nothing more than a word. A candle in the wind that flickers out after a strong enough breeze. She has never met anyone that made her feel so high, so extraordinarily happy. Maybe she will, maybe it is one of the faces she sees day in, day out, but just hasn't talked enough to. She isn't the type to fawn over an attractive tom, or gossip about how she thinks one of those guys over there likes her. No, if it is meant to happen, it will at the exact time that's best. Yes, Streamfall believes in fate and destiny, though has guesses about her warrior ancestors all the same.
EXPERIENCE// Regular clan cat life. Only kit.
OTHER// My last cat for a while. She's my only she-cat, and one of my most interesting. <3 [/blockquote] |
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Post by raid on Feb 25, 2011 21:30:14 GMT -5
Her personality and description are a little short. Description should be around 150 (its 122 so it's pretty close :] ) and personality should be around 200 (it's only 92...)
If you can fix that, it'd be lovely (:
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Post by aero ❥ on Feb 25, 2011 23:33:54 GMT -5
Sorry about that, I added more. Didn't realize how short those really were. x/
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Post by raid on Feb 26, 2011 9:17:58 GMT -5
xx accepted
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