+Oakpaw+

[wolfy]

NAME// --- Oakpaw
AGE// --- 6 Moons
GENDER// --- Tom
CLAN// --- Tempestclan
DESIRED POSITION// --- Apprentice
SHORT DESCRIPTION// --- Sleek tabby Tom with Emerald green eyes


DESCRIPTION//

Body Type

Oakpaw just seems to be one of the few that are considered vertically challenge. He is short and small for his size, making extremely difficult to train sometimes. He wasn't built much for strength although he sometimes goes off and asks to train in fighting so he can get stronger. His maw is that of a triangular shape and not much different then others. His eyes are positioned correctly and his ears a big for his size, a hint of a needed growth-spurt. Throughout his training he will grow to be a monstrous cat, just not for awhile. His paws are also big for his size, but it helps for the being in his territory as well as balance.

Besides the large body parts, he has an evenly distributed tail and neck, both being sleek and long. His legs are also on the long side but it never stops him from much, he just proves his mightiness by climbing up useless trees. He never really shows his true talents, refusing their presence and going for the muscle type cat.

Pelt Colorization

Oakpaw is a dirty tabby cat. His fur is to the skin and not very long. The pattern is nothing of specialty, just a bunch of lines in his definition. At the top he has very big black stripes, which go all the way down the back and forming one big streak at his tail. On his legs are also pitch black stripes, going all the way down to the paws. Stripes of tan mixed with other colors shape out his whole body, forming who he really is. These are of course nothing special though. His eyes are a sluggish emerald green. They become brighter during full moons but not by much.

PERSONALITY//

Oakpaw possesses a rare case of unfriendliness. He doesn't attract much attention to himself unless its to prove how strong he is. The attitude he shows is more then enough to tell he doesn't have much of a social-life. He never wanted to be a medicine cat but he also never wanted to be Deputy either. To him, a warrior is suffice enough.

Whenever one challenges he would risk one of his own paws to defeat and prove himself. He would be willing to waste half a night for a hunt so he could improve his skills. When it comes to fighting he is mostly silent but takes in any taunt that comes to him, using his anger to build his own skills. This can be dangerous, if fixed into attacking he could potentially attack one of his own clan members.

He never backs down when offered something. He helps when told to but when stuck to do something he doesn't want to he becomes a bully. Rude, and demanding for others to leave him alone. He never accepts help for himself. If he can do something on his own he will do it on his own, never accepting what he really needs. When something exiting happens he will smile and get excited about it, but he won't speak aloud much to others. If he ever saw a blind or dumb cat he would help, but only when nice.

Whenever Oakpaw is near She-cats he becomes someone completely different. He gets embarrassed by the littlest of things and even shows it sometimes, not intentionally though. He would do lots for them, and even though he never shows it, he adores kits. If he ever saw some, you might catch him playing with them. Would Oakpaw ever get a mate? If it came to it yes, he would. His top priority though is to prove he can become something other than a Warrior.

When it came to decisions, most of his would be unwise. If there was a border skirmish he would threaten and hiss and possibly fight. If one would cross into Tempestclan territory he would call war upon he or she. He gets angry over the littlest things but keeps most in his head, pretending to see himself smite whoever taunted him. He will never take a fight inside camp, never try to get in a fight with one of his own clan members.

EXPERIENCE//

As a kit Oakkit had been beaten by his siblings. Every time he tried to beat them in some sort of competition, he would lose. His siblings never wanted to hang with him either, and like any brother and sister, they did anything to lower his status. He was mentally beaten and never went around others. He would try his best to hang with Warriors and get hints and tips, but most the time his siblings got in it again. He always loved Stories though, that was one thing no kit would take from him. He would always visit the Elders for a good story, legends and such about the leader mostly. Only rarely did he not visit them everyday.

Oakkit was always teased by others kits because of his ears. He would sometimes scratch at them and try to bite them, but in secret. If anyone ever saw him do so, they would more then likely get at him for it. No wounds were big enough to create scars, and rarely did anyone notice them wounded. He didn't want anyone to think of him weird and lower his status even more. It was rare for him to scratch at them to begin with and when he did he made an awful excuse for it.

As he got older and grew a little in size, kits finally left him alone and some came and played with him. Most of the time he would and when he was ready for apprenticeship kits were born. Seeing them at first birth he loved them and grew fond of them. He didn't ever want to tease others, mostly kits. He grew as any other, but with a bit of teasing and that was all. Some might say he grew with a poor life but it actually helped him grow to be a better cat before he finally accepted the role as an Apprentice.

OTHER//

If you want to be a Sibling of his you can :D

[MiNTY♥]

Just a few things to fix that haven't been picked up by the spell check feature (:

"Hi maw is..." Could you please change this to His?

"different then others..." and change this to then

"and hit ears..." change to his I think thats what you meant.

"...other then a Warrior." than please (:

And when you are talking about him as a kit could you refer to him as Oakkit? It just makes a bit more sense.

[wolfy]

Edited

[MiNTY♥]

Ok great xx accepted (: